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Deseaba morir en tu pecho donde brotan gotitas de humedad. Leer tu piel con mis dedos y mi ingenuidad hipócrita. Modelar nuevamente tus contornos y límites. Preparado para navegar juntos, al ritmo del mar, con una marea blanca de sábanas, fundiéndonos. Que cada minuto que pasara volviera a comenzar, chocando el tiempo con su estúpida relatividad; que cada parpadeo fuese una fotografía, para insertar en mi memoria postiza. En tu piel donde nace cada pensamiento, cada amanecer. Me mirabas, me tomabas de la mano, me guiabas al centro de tu mundo. Maldecías mis voces y regañabas mi paciencia, mi timidez absorta. Dibujamos el mundo y un futuro feliz en un cielo de pintura reseca. Coloreamos días enteros, animamos meriendas y planeamos celebraciones absurdas. Entrelazado en tus nudos. Escabulléndonos en la arena. Escarbándonos. Descubriéndonos. Doblegándonos mutuamente. Uniéndonos. Sumándonos. Separándonos. Restándonos. Buscando excusas. Encontrando tonos, tonos rojos y verdes; tus rojos, tus verdes. Me explicabas tus raros conceptos, tus laberintos, tus fiebres. Me enseñabas a rodar por el pasto y caminar entre árboles a ojos cerrados. Tú y yo flotando, y mis miradas son lascivia.

Aferrando mis pies a donde todas las cosas nacen, en tu morada, nuestra estrella. Ahí, mis pudores sepultados, vencidos. Sin saber si por la mañana recordarás mi nombre. Con la incertidumbre de si me considerarás un error. Con el alma colgada, esperándote.

Deseaba morir en tu pecho donde brotan gotitas de humedad. Sabiendo que no estas dispuesta a mí, a mis soplos y nadar. Me mataste con dos palabras de burla, antes de un sorbo. Y yo esperaba a que me hundieras en las miserias de tu mala fama.

Nunca. Nunca más. Nunca más diré. Nunca más diré lo que siento. Nunca más diré lo que siento por ti. Nunca. Nunca más. Nunca más sabrás. Nunca más sabrás algo de mí. Nunca más sabrás algo de mí y mi amor. Amor. Amor enfermizo.

- Dios, ayúdame - musité. Desgarrando las sílabas ilusas, redondas, ingenuas por mi garganta; agotando así, toda mi fe.


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Me gusto mucho.
Es un placer visitarlos amigos. De una manera simple me atrapan.
Felicidades amiguito gemelillo.
 
"la rompiste peter!!!!"
algo tan cuma como eso rompería todo todo lo bello de tu texto, pero igual lo digo porque fue lo primero que pensé cuando lo leí. y bueno esas cosas que una piensa a la primera y que son tan sinceras hay que decirlas, así tal cual son, porque son el sentimiento primerizo, más espontáneo, limpio y llano, aunque suene cuma.
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un texto tibio era lo que necesitaba en una mañana fria
muy sincero y elocuente
como aquellas palabras de los entes
-mejor me olvido de heidegger, eso del ser y los entes- y me pongo a pensar en los frankfurtianos
porque son marxistas porque priorizan la carne y a la xuxa con el ser y el pensamiento
al igual que usted con sus bellas y curiosas palabras que lo recorren todo...
 
Hay algunos que dicen que tienen problemas con las extensiones. Pero en el fondo, cuando quieren, pueden explayarse y hacer ese tipo de cosas q emocionan... entonces una se siente tonta, pero en realidad a veces tiene q ser así y una debe aprender a conectarse con el hemisferio derecho del cerebro. Me alegro de haber pasado por aquí, felicidades Ed. Sigue escribiendo así... y (de todos modos)no olvides aquella frase cliché 'menos es mas'
 
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He leido este blog desde sus incios y lo cierto -sin desmerecer el resto- el post de Ed me empujo a felicitarlos. Esta muy, muy bueno.
Considerenme un numero mas en su contador.
 
Se me conmovieron hasta los calcetines. Magnífico texto don Ed.
 
peter gabriel 2006 yujujui!
 
¿por que suprimen los comentarios?
 
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el autor del post lo eliminó... no nosotros.
 
Me encantó....pero mi inspriración está muerta por culpa de Román...
 
Yo fui quien elimino la entrada, perdón...
 
bueno yo tengo que felicitar a ED

pk sin mayores recursos, logro aprender mi tecnica y hoy en dia es un chico k compone bakan,

te felicito pk de a poco has sido como yo,m aun cuando te falta

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pal mono(a) anterior. la envidia regada por doquier, no soportan que el cabro tenga éxito y haya escrito lo mejor que he leído en este blog.
 
qué lindo texto. efecto fotográfico. el flash preciso, las líneas tan bien ordenadas.
felicitaciones .
 
yo soy la verdadera isicabrachica... quién me suplanta...? me cambiaré el nick quédatelo... si no te da para más la creatividad ahora seré

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a mi me gusta knox... sin desmerecer a los demas obviamente, pero él es el único que me confunde a la primera, me divierte a la segunda y encanta a la tercera.

Sus textos dan mucho q pensar... eso es lo rico que tiene él... no lo da todo... te hace trabajar y te da la opción de imaginar más cosas con sus cuentos... cuentos que para él son tan simples, pero para algunos lectores, son tan complejos.

comienza, pero no termina.
 
Donde guardo la mirada que me diste alguna vez?, donde guardo las promesas?, donde guardo el ayer?, donde guardo niña tu manera de tocarme?, Donde guardo mi fe...
A la primera persona que me ayude a sentir otra vez, pienso entregarle mi vida, pienso entregarle mi fe. (A.Sanz)

Esto del amor no correspondido es un mal universal.
EXTRAORDINARIO!! tu texto.
Gisel
 
Donde guardo la mirada que me diste alguna vez?, Donde guardo las promesas?, donde guardo el ayer?, Donde guardo niña tu manera de tocarme?, donde guardo mi fe...

A la primera persona que me ayude a sentir otra vez, pienso entregarle mi vida, pienso entregarle mi fe... (A. Sanz)

Esto del amor no correspondido es un mal universal

FABULOSO !! tu texto
Gisel
 
Que quieres que te diga... siempre me ha gustado como escribes, creo que tienes ese don, es increíble como cosas tan simples pueden transformarse en complejas (jajaja)
Eres una gran persona y te felicito por todas las cosas que escribes, además de que tienes tu estilo... es bkn leer tus publicaciones en este blog
 
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